Monday, May 16, 2016

SOM Peer

Who - Brandon Semenuk
What - Redbull Rampage 
Where - Utah
When - Friday Oct. 16 2015
Why - Redbull is hosting the biggest downhill mountain biking event in the world
How - Live on tv and other broadcasting.

Car Raid preview

1. Who will your do your car raid with (who is your subject)? Colby
2. When will you do this car raid? I have already done it and wrote it on paper.
3. Write 4-5 questions you can use to start this interview? What is the smell of the car? How old is the car? How clean is the car? What is inside of the car? How do they drive the car?
4. What kind of details should your expect to write down to help advance the story line? Just details of how clean it is and what main and small things are inside of it.

Friday, May 13, 2016

Opinions Story

       Uber and lift in my option are two of one of the best things that came to Austin. Everyday during the summer I would go downtown to ride my bike with my friends.
       My parents and my friends parents would have to take a lot of time out of their day just to take and pick us up from downtown everyday.
      Once Uber and lift came along my parents were first not sure about it. Then my parents used uber on the way home from a party with their friends. After that me and all my friends would split the prices to Uber or Lift downtown.
      Then Prop 1 came.... Prop one was made to force Uber and Lift to have very strict background checks on the drivers. I feel like background checks are very important, but  I don't think that they should be so strict that they throw a very important company out of business.
       I think that Uber and Lift should come up with a cheap but very good system for background checks. That way they can go back into business and help people who are in need of a ride.
         

Monday, May 2, 2016

Personal Essay - Opinion Pt.2

1. What was one idea that the writer gave in the Wide Range of Topics section that you can use as you start deciding on a topic? Whatever you care about is fair game to use as an essay topic.

2. What was one idea the writer gave in the Opinions Pieces section that you should remember as you are writing your piece? Details draw the reader in, generalizations keep them out. Be specific. Avoid using abstract expressions and phrases such as “the best day of my life”, “my happiest moment as a parent”, “I’d never known greater grief” to describe emotions of love, loss, anger, joy, satisfaction, etc.
3. List three suggestions the writer makes in the Personal Essays and Crafts section that you will use as you write. While personal essays allows for the use of many fictional craft elements — dialogue, setting, point of view, characterization – if you use facts to anchor your piece or as a springboard for your opinions, you need to double-check them for accuracy. One factual error can prevent the reader from believing much else that you have to say.

SNO Online Paper - Opinion Pt.2

Vandegrift Voice:
1. Who wrote the story? 
Johnny Morreale & Jasmine Moreno
2. What is their story about?
A Sophomore athlete at Vandegrift, Kendal Shields, attending olympic trials for swimming. 
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. Everyone has dreams and desires, hoping to grow up and become something incredible in life. Having this desire to pursue these dreams offers hope of another opening to come. Each and every step is a step to helping others dream to come true or at least to work just as hard to make that dream happen.
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic? Though she admits the training is a grueling process itself, Shields believes it gets results.
“It is brutal sometimes,” Shields said. “But it pays off.”
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion. Their opinion was valid in that they chose to stick with the side in supporting Kendall and swimming, the only time they brought up opposition was the hardwork, effort she was having to put in to be such a successful swimmer. 
6. Are there any quotes in the story? Yes, they interviewed Kendall and her mother for the newspaper. 
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)? 3rd person

JBHS Lonestar Dispatch: 
1. Who wrote the story?
Granger Coats
2. What is their story about?
Jasmine Correa; JBHS Senior//pageant show contestant making a name for herself.
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. “I started pageants about 3 years ago and the first one I did was just for fun with my friend. I placed 2nd runner up and I liked the rush of adrenaline you get from being on stage,” Correa said. 
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic? “It’s undeniable that she loves what she does. I admire the fact that she stays focused on school and that’s her priority. I think she manages both perfect considering how demanding they are,” Castillo said.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they ever go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion. In this interview, they focused mainly on Jasmine's modeling and the 2 other opinions shared had to do with her keeping her grades up at the same time she travels around modeling. 
6. Are there any quotes in the story? “I stay very organized and on top of all of my work to make sure that wherever I’m going for modeling, I’ll get my work that I’ll be missing so I don’t get behind,” Correa said.

1. Who wrote the story? Aro Majumder, Jack Stenglein
2. What is their story about? Westlake vs. Lake Travis Lacrosse game on Senior night
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. Senior night promised an entertaining matchup between two of the top lacrosse programs in the state. Coming into the game as the favorite, Westlake proved to be too much to handle for Lake Travis in a touted D1 lacrosse rivalry game on April 20. Westlake set the tone for the game right off the bat and didn’t look back, winning the game 13-8. 
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic? The spark appeared to come in the form of a streaking run from center field into the Westlake third by Lake Travis junior Cade Green that ended in a goal. Unfortunately for Lake Travis, its team wasn’t able to harness the momentum and saw the game slowly slip from its hands. Westlake’s continuous pressure was too much to handle, and the Lake Travis defense bent until finally breaking for five more goals, making the final score 13-8. 
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion. They did a great job appealing to both sides during the lacrosse game, however; Westlake did end up winning.
6. Are there any quotes in the story? “We just kept reinforcing the fundamentals that we’re working on,” head coach Chris Delfausse said. “Throughout 48 minutes, you’re always going to have ups and downs, so [whenever we’re struggling], we just go back to what was working and back to the basics and try to get refocused on what we’re trying to accomplish.”
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)? 3rd person

Opinions writing preview activity

1. Who wrote the story? Granger Coats

2. What is their story about? Drug dog searches make students feel violated

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. There topic is rights we have as an american, "The American flag stands gallantly above the reverted noble school."

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic? Yes

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion. No, I felt like they did a good job.

6. Are there any quotes in the story? No

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)? 3rd

1. Who wrote the story? Alicia Molina

2. What is their story about? How things can spread on social media

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. No it was a general and is how many people think about it.

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic? No

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion. No it was very eel stated 

6. Are there any quotes in the story? Yes

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)? 3rd

1. Who wrote the story? Fuaad Ajaz

2. What is their story about? How music can send a huge message around the world and expressing what you think. 

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. "some people were offended by the halftime performance"

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic? some people may be angry.

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.

6. Are there any quotes in the story? yes

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)? 3rd

1. Who wrote the story?Mia Barbosa

2. What is their story about? Will the ap history test help you get into a good collage              

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. " I think its a good way for kids to get ahead in collage."

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic? No

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion. No it was very clear to me.

6. Are there any quotes in the story? No

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)? 3rd

1. Who wrote the story? Eliana Lynch

2. What is their story about? Apple not letting the fbi get int there phones and evading users privacy

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. "Apple will give their codes to the FBI when ever they would like."

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic? Yes

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion. No it was a very good strait forward topic.

6. Are there any quotes in the story? Yes

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)? 3rd

Finally, answer the following questions:

A. What do you think the major differences between a hard news story and an opinions piece? Come up with at least three. The harder it is the longer it takes to write, 

B. Why do you think there aren't very many photos on this page? because its about weed and I don't think you can draw or put pictures of it on a school newspaper.

C. What are three topics you think would be good to write an opinions piece on? 
Bmx, Motocross, Mountain Biking 

Thursday, April 28, 2016

Final Exam Planning

1. When will you shoot this assignment? This weekend
2. Where will you shoot? Downtown Austin
3. What will you be documenting or telling your "story" about? Bmx, City, Morning to night.
4. What equipment needs will you have to get this finished? DSLR, Go Pro, Me and my friends.
5. Make sure to describe the process, by this I mean, where will you use the video portion, where will you use still images, where will your narration be, etc? It will be what i do from when i wake up until i go to bed. all of the pictures will be taken during that time and put at the end.

High Dynamic Range photography




1. What manipulations to the camera will you need to make to create an HDR image?change exposure
2. What equipment will we use to take this type of image? tripod
3. What is the reason someone might take an HDR image? That way they will have a perfectly balanced picture.
4. What can we expect to happen with the images once we merge them together, what will we see that we might not have seen with just one photo? won't see shadows and everything will be lit

Monday, April 4, 2016

School Uniforms

1. Students, Parents, Superintendent.

1. Students
    -What do think about the new district policy?
    -What would you change about the policy?
    -Do you think the policy is too strict? How?
    -How have other students at your school reacted?
    -What do you like about the uniforms?
    -What do you dislike about the uniforms?
    -What happens when you don't have your uniform that day?
    -What do your parents think about this new policy?

2. Parents
    -What do you think about the new district policy?
    -How does the new policy effect your student?
    -Do the uniforms cost you money? if so how much?
    -How many uniforms do you have to have?
    -What do you like about the uniforms?
    -What do you dislike about the uniforms?
    -What did you get to use for clothing when you were in school?
    -Do you think changing the policy randomly is okay?

3. Superintendent
    -What pushed you to make this decision?
    -How are the students reacting to this decision?
    -Do the teachers have to dress in uniforms?
    -What have uniforms changed in the students?

Inverted Pyramid


Thursday, March 31, 2016

Student of the month interview

Whats your name?
Payton Bellman.
What grade are you in?
9th.
Why do you think you were picked?
No idea.
What type of grades to you make?
A's and B's.
How important is school to you?
Very Important.
What is your day routine after school?
Netflix, Chores, Homework.
What are your studying methods?
Repetition .
How did you react when you got student of the month?
Not surprised because everyone got the student of the month.
How did your friends react when you got student of the month?
They were very happy.
How did your parents react when you got student of the month?
They were very proud.
What all did you have to achieve to become student of the month?
Work hard.
How many times can you be the student of the month?
Every month .
Do you receive any certificates for becoming the student of the month?
Yes, I got a gold metal.
What is your advantages to the other students?
I am very smart.
Does being student of the month make you strive for better grades?
Yes, I now know my brains full potential.
Does your competition make you scared?
No, I am too smart.
What job do you want to have?
I want to be a detective.
Who do you look up too?
My mom and dad.
What makes you want to make good grades?
College.
How much competition do you have?
None.

Architecture Preview

1. Who is the architect (the person who built it)?Charles Deaton
2. When was it built?1963
3. Where is it located?
 Genesee Mountain
4. Is it a private building or can you visit it?no it is a private house
5. Is there information on how much it cost to build? 3.1 million
6. Is there a reason the building was created or the history of the building itself? Charles Deaton said 
"On Genesee Mountain I found a high point of land where I could stand and feel the great reaches of the Earth. I wanted the shape of it to sing an unencumbered song."
7. Why did you pick this building? (write at least a paragraph on this question)

I picked this building because i really loved how the house was built. I really like how modern it still looks even though it was built in the 60's. I also like the location where it was built. I would love to wake up in the morning an have an amazing view.

1. Who is the architect (the person who built it)? Frank Gehry
2. When was it built?October 18, 1997
3. Where is it located?Bilbao
4. Is it a private building or can you visit it?you can visit
5. Is there information on how much it cost to build?$20,000,000
6. Is there a reason the building was created or the history of the building itself? museum 
7. Why did you pick this building? I picked it because it has a lot of really cool features. I like all of the organic shapes. I also think the material is cool.


1. Who is the architect (the person who built it)? we only know where he was from 
2. When was it built? 1972 to 1974
3. Where is it located?Portugal
4. Is it a private building or can you visit it?its a house 
5. Is there information on how much it cost to build? no info
6. Is there a reason the building was created or the history of the building itself? no info
7. Why did you pick this building? i though it was cool to make a house out of a solid rock. I think its cool how they took 2 years just to bore out the rock.


1. Who is the architect (the person who built it)?Piet Blom
2. When was it built?1974
3. Where is it located? netherlands
4. Is it a private building or can you visit it? yea if you live there
5. Is there information on how much it cost to build? no info
6. Is there a reason the building was created or the history of the building itself? for housing 
7. Why did you pick this building? I thought that the roof looked cool. At first i thought it was a 
sculpture.

1. Who is the architect (the person who built it)? Colin Fournier
2. When was it built?2003
3. Where is it located?Austria 
4. Is it a private building or can you visit it?yes 
5. Is there information on how much it cost to build?no info 
6. Is there a reason the building was created or the history of the building itself? made for art inclined people
7. Why did you pick this building?I though it looked like a... i don't really even know. When i saw it i just got very confused. i liked it because i had to sit and think about what i was looking at for a while.

Sensory Overload

What do you think about this statement? i think that people would have a lot of different thoughts.
Do you agree or disagree? I agree
As an aspiring photographer how does this make you feel about your photography? 

It makes me think more about what building have and to think outside of the box

2. When you looked through the images, did you want to visit this place and take your camera?

i  personally would not want to visit only because I'm not really into that sort of stuff. 

3. What do you think it would be like to be the child of someone who worked at this place?

I think a small child would really love it.

4. Describe your favorite photo to me.

i likes the photo of all of the colorful balls.

Wednesday, March 30, 2016

Learning how to interview

assignment #1

1. Students, Parents, Superintendent.

1. Students
    -What do think about the new district policy?
    -What would you change about the policy?
    -Do you think the policy is too strict? How?
    -How have other students at your school reacted?
    -What do you like about the uniforms?
    -What do you dislike about the uniforms?
    -What happens when you don't have your uniform that day?
    -What do your parents think about this new policy?

2. Parents
    -What do you think about the new district policy?
    -How does the new policy effect your student?
    -Do the uniforms cost you money? if so how much?
    -How many uniforms do you have to have?
    -What do you like about the uniforms?
    -What do you dislike about the uniforms?
    -What did you get to use for clothing when you were in school?
    -Do you think changing the policy randomly is okay?

3. Superintendent
    -What pushed you to make this decision?
    -How are the students reacting to this decision?
    -Do the teachers have to dress in uniforms?
    -What have uniforms changed in the students?

Architecture shoot

Details

Patterns

Surroundings

Light

Angles

Tuesday, March 22, 2016

Portfolio Analysis

a. Name of photographer - Melissa Golden
b. General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)- old people
c. List three problems that the judges noted with the portfolio - lost of un needed objects, clutter, off topic.
d. List two things the judges like- the good portraits
e. What is your overall impression of the photographer? What did you like or not like? I did not like very many of her photographs.


a. Name of photographer - Daryl Peveto
b. General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)- poor way of life
c. List three problems that the judges noted with the portfolio - blurry, too slow of a shutter speed, corny.
d. List two things the judges like-  action shots.
e. What is your overall impression of the photographer? What did you like or not like? i got bored of their pictures.


a. Name of photographer - Anthony Souffle
b. General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)- saving a bird
c. List three problems that the judges noted with the portfolio -subjects were too bland, went for the cute kid.
d. List two things the judges like- the color, stopped action
e. What is your overall impression of the photographer? What did you like or not like? i liked more than half of the photos.


a. What did the judges note as strengths as they were critiquing it? how he seemed to be part of the action
b. What do you see as strengths? Do you see any weaknesses? not scared to get into the action. no weaknesses 

3. Watch the contest recap video at the very bottom.
a. Briefly describe the process the judges went through in deciding the winner.

they needed a good editor and good diversity. also having all strong pictures.

1. Describe one photo that you agree with the judges on. Explain why you and the judges do or do not like it.
i agree with the greyhound story and how he tells a good story with only 8 photos.

2. Describe one photo that you do NOT agree with the judges on. Explain why you think the judges are wrong.

i did not agree with the baseball pictures i thought they were amazing considering the camera he used.

extra credit


Monday, February 22, 2016

Front Pages of the World

  1. What is your favorite newspaper front page? Why? Austin American-Statesman, Because its about where i am from.
  2. What is your favorite headline from that newspaper? Why are you interested in it? The ACL smaller venue. Because I love to go to ACL.
  3. How many stories are on the front page of your favorite? I am only interested in that one.
  4. What do you notice that all newspaper front pages have in common? They all have a equal amount of text and photos.
  5. What are things that vary (or are different) on the front pages of different newspapers? The colors and where the pictures were taken.

Friday, January 22, 2016

Yearbook

List 25 things that should be in a yearbook.
1. title
2. hard cover
3. subtitle
4. title on first page
5. index
6. sports
7. fine arts
8. core classes
9. student pictures
10. staff pictures
11. teacher of the year
12. students of the year
13. motivational stories
14.  extracurricular activités
15. school events
16. trending music
17. trending movies
18. trending shows
19. trending cloths
20. trending shoes
21. senior messages
22. pages #'s with your name
23. class pictures
24. year of year book on side
25. make the title pop

1. What is the title of your book?
Impact
2. What school is it from?

McNeil High School
3. What "thematic elements" do you see in your book? This means what elements are evident from beginning to end of the bookSports
4. How many sections are in your book? This could be tough to figure out, but do your best

100+
5. What is your favorite "spread"? A spread is 2 pages about the same topic

The action spread
6. Is there an Index in your book?

Yes
7. Are there photos of groups of people, like clubs and organizations?

Yes 
8. Is there a table of contents?

Yes
9. How many people go to the school whose book you have?

2683
10. What state is your book from?

Texas

Wednesday, January 20, 2016

Magazine Cover and Prompt Shoot #3 peer review



1. What is the name of the magazine that you looked at and who made it?

I looked at Payton's magazine it was called "Nature Weekly".

2. List two things you liked about the magazine cover

All the different colors were nice. It flowed together good

3. Suggest something to the creator to improve the cover

don't think anything needs to be changed.

4. Why did you pick this cover? Specifically what attracted your eyes.

I picked it because of the colors. They were very vibrant.

5. Is there a bar code? Is it appropriate in size and located in the correct place?

yeah there is a bar code. Yes it is placed correct 

6. If you were walking by the magazines in Barnes and Nobles would you pick this magazine up and look at it? Why or Why not?

Yeah, I would pick this cover up. As soon as i looked it would stick out with its colors.

7. Can you tell if it was a portrait or self-portrait?

I thought it was more of a portrait.


http://hannahhall218.blogspot.com

1. Which photo do you like best? Why?

I like her pause picture. Because its very creative.

2. Which is your least favorite image? Why?

Pose, Because it is too original.

3. Overall, make two positive statements about their pictures.

Good use of the photography rules. Nice Focus.

4. Overall, what is one area that this person could improve upon in your opinion.

More creativity

5. Which prompt do you think they did the best portraying, from your perspective?

Pause.

6. Which prompt do you think they did the least successfully portray, from your perspective?

Connected